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PostSubject: hey this is one of my new peom what u guys think?   Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:04 am

the darkness within my heart is taking over this condemd angel of light in my mind i can see the truth of the condemed the inecent i can see dieing within my graps all around me the blood of my broken heart

these wounds are so deep within me they just cant heal for my broken dreams will never come to life in my eyes the dark shadows only sorund me in the twilight of the moon shinging on the black cristle lake in frount of my feet

i take a walk in the moon light smurging my darkend condemed heart in the pircing water in mind i see no breath coming to my aid in the darkness within my own nightmares for i am lonly darkness of my demons will condem my poor sole forever in the fire pit of my chest that bearns for that one last breath of crisp cold air in the moonlight
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PostSubject: Re: hey this is one of my new peom what u guys think?   Fri Feb 23, 2007 8:25 pm

Sort of emo, but it was pretty good...I liked it...but I'm moving this to the Art section.

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PostSubject: Re: hey this is one of my new peom what u guys think?   Mon Feb 26, 2007 11:28 am

Its depressing and makes me want to drink.
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PostSubject: Re: hey this is one of my new peom what u guys think?   Tue Feb 27, 2007 6:21 pm

Then it got the right response!! >.O

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